Monday, August 17, 2009

Barbaric bard


The date shows 28-10-2001 when the poem was written. I try to recollect the circumstances when i wrote this one. It was in my school days when me and one of my friends who was a she were pulling each others legs.A funny incident sow the seed for the thought for this poem that might sound too rude and cruel. But there was no animosity whatsoever when i wrote it. By gods grace she is happily married with a caring husband and a lovely son. Here goes the poem of an amateur school boy who found joy bringing together words that sounded similar.

22-10-2001

To you in your marriage,
When you get into a bondage,
Which i shall ravage,

Keep this envisage,
Till your old age,
To spare you I am not a sage
And to you i will be a real savage.

Be ready to pay homage,
To the person who'll share all your age.

To you in your marriage,
From someone on the rampage.

Too unskilled and funny it is as i read it now. I can come up with lot of improvisations but i wanted this to be raw as it was when i wrote it. This should fit in a rock album for all the negativity it has in it ;)

3 comments:

  1. :-))

    Did you give this to her or just wrote it in your diary?

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  2. This really really made me smile :-) so cute for the thought at that age... nice...

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